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[C-Chan]

Yo Darknight?  Bored of what?  Vistan itself or the fact that you're not getting critiques?  Or both?  ^__^

Lesse,... -v-

*TRIES REAL HARD TO DISCOVER CRITIQUE*

...

*brain lights on fire*

Owww...

*douses flames*

Her spear is too Linux-like.  Needs more bloat.  ^____^

Nah, just kidding.  -v-

Well here's a thing,... for her transparent skirt thingie, you know how we can see the front and back of the left portion, but can only see the front of the right portion?  Is that intentional (camera angle?), or do you still need to draw a hint that the thingie wraps around her leg?  '__'

Also, I recall it's made out of very glossy plastic, no?  so I would recommend at least adding a small sliver of pure white to complete the gloss effect (both on her skirt and on her plastic armlets).  You're the artist here, so I don't need to tell you where.  -v-

Other than the fact that she's no OSX, it's lookin' good.  ^__^
More importantly, you did it very quickly again, so that's reason enough to celebrate!  At this rate, you'll be rolling out Tiger-sama before the holidays!  ^v^

[CaptBrenden]

Needs moar cowbell.

[Darknight_88]

Changed some shadows following VonDaab critique. Thanks!

Made the eyes smaller, dunno if they look better? I should make the eyebrows more angled to the inside, but messing more with a 104mb .psd @ 2:00 am...nah, later.

Well here's a thing,... for her transparent skirt thingie, you know how we can see the front and back of the left portion, but can only see the front of the right portion?  Is that intentional (camera angle?), or do you still need to draw a hint that the thingie wraps around her leg?  '__'

Also, I recall it's made out of very glossy plastic, no?  so I would recommend at least adding a small sliver of pure white to complete the gloss effect (both on her skirt and on her plastic armlets).  You're the artist here, so I don't need to tell you where.  -v-

Well, I think the rear skirt thingy not showing in the right side it's more of an issue of camera angle. Actually I tried to make it appear in the first stages of sketch, but I didn't liked how it looked. Tried once again now and failed miserably >_>

Added some more white, but not a lot, since I'm trying to keep it along the same style as the previous vis-tan drawing.

Other than the fact that she's no OSX, it's lookin' good.  ^__^
More importantly, you did it very quickly again, so that's reason enough to celebrate!  At this rate, you'll be rolling out Tiger-sama before the holidays!  ^v^

quoting myself ^____________^

Put into queue, after ChiVistan, Vis-tan, 95-tan, more Vis-tan pics and whatever I think about.
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Needs moar cowbell.

I don't think so Tim!

[C-Chan]

Yo Darknight.  -v-

Well the skirt kinda looks the same as before, only with brighter highlights.  '__'

But the armlets are spot on to my suggestion.  ^^ b
(although perhaps a bit too broad,... almost metallic; ah well, it still works.... ^.^)

Put into queue, after ChiVistan, Vis-tan, 95-tan, more Vis-tan pics and whatever I think about.

Oh right, almost forgot.  ^__^
You've had Amiga-tan a lot on your mind for over a year now.  ^v^

Oh well, can't be helped....  I guess I'll give you permission to draw Amiga-tan before Tiger-sama.  ^.^

[CaptBrenden]

HA!

We all know that darknight is a supporter of windows. 3.1sama is on the list well before either of those two. Maybe with some slightly yuri action with the slightly younger 95sama, showing that mature girls are hot.

[Darknight_88]

b...bb...BUT THEY'RE BOTH WOMEN, AREN'T THEY??!

[CaptBrenden]

hence the word yuri in my statement.  We have a rabid yaoi fangirl here, lets get some yuri going on to counter act it.  Whats wrong? cant handle 3.1 and 95 joined in loving embrace?

[Darknight_88]

beautiful sisterly love?
the concept sounds interesting.

But not anytime soon. But way ahead than Tiger-tan in the queue. Just not straightforward yuri >_>

[CaptBrenden]

But way ahead than Tiger-tan in the queue

VICTORY!

[Darknight_88]

k, I give up. I suck at backgrounds. Specially the ones that require a lot of SHINY and glowing things. Only changed an eye (slighty larger).
PNG version, backgroundless. Official final release.


I MUST PLAY NAVY FIELD. They're going to release an new patch that will change a lot of things, and WHAT AM I DOING MEANWHILE??!

[CaptBrenden]

Again, draw sum 3.1 and 95. ^_^

Plus, it shouldnt be that hard to google a computeresk free floating shiny light type background, possibly something from vista or something for her.. Please try harder!

Added after 32 minutes:

Well I guess I can post this now...



Unfortunatly Tsubashis representations is kinda creepy and scary compaired to her -_-  Le sigh..

[Darknight_88]

Well, I was trying to do something along the lines of a magical girl, but I just fail. Anyway, this is the result of said effort:


Well, I could always just attach her to the Windows Vista default wallpaper. Which would be just lame, as I already did that to my previous pic...

[CaptBrenden]

try chainging the magical circle to white light and put it over the vista background?

[SleepyD]

haha, magical circles are fun.  Remember the combat suit 95-tan?  muahaha... (although, twas the swords in the ground that had the circles)

........riiight, I need to get back to OS/2... curse these physics assignments.

3.1 and 95? Interesting..... I've never really drawn something like that..... wonder if I should give it a try?


lol, oh, where does my time go?

[Darknight_88]

glowing ChiVistan glows...