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Toki · April 29, 2009, 06:59:15 PM

This is what I was talking about a while back, I just no finished it! ^_^

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IanDanKilmaster · April 29, 2009, 07:06:20 PM

I barely remember that mention, but this is great. Pirate? Hmmmm... she drops anchor... on ye head!

Sailors v Pirates?

Toki · April 29, 2009, 07:09:35 PM

Thats because it was a long while back >.>;; Sorries.

May is the first mate of the May ship in Guilty Gear <:3 I don't usually do fanart but I'm trying to get better at it.

NejinOniwa · April 29, 2009, 08:06:53 PM

I smell delicious booty in this bay. <3

Toki · April 29, 2009, 08:50:02 PM

NejinOniwa · April 30, 2009, 01:54:44 AM

_W_

Smokey · April 30, 2009, 01:07:13 PM

Wow, your art is like drinking a 7-upÂ® after being used to drinking CokeÂ® all the time... ^_^
Good to see two styles again... ;010

Vaereth · April 30, 2009, 05:31:08 PM

Wow, Toki draws excellent, i love it ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

continue the theme of Me-chan))

Toki · April 30, 2009, 07:07:02 PM

OKKUSENMAN OKKUSENMAN

I love ME-tan! <3

NejinOniwa · May 01, 2009, 05:57:56 AM

...middle.

.w.

Smokey · May 01, 2009, 06:44:28 AM

ME-tan looks like she's gonna fight... ^_^

Vaereth · May 01, 2009, 09:35:35 AM

Yeah It wasn't Me-tan from beginning, than I saw that the girl come out to be like her so she becomes Me-tan ^_^
Nejin
Yeah I also think it is middle

cuz i was in a hurry when drew it. Can you tell me about mistakes though?

NejinOniwa · May 01, 2009, 06:01:36 PM

I was more thinking about the fact that it gives me a "middle"-y impression, something about her posture says middle...or just that the picture's focus is on its center, I dunno. ^^

As for mistakes - personally I think the arms and legs are a bit too much two-partly accentuated. The face is a bit too small (more realistic, of course, but you've gotta decide on manga-style or realistic before you start drawing ^^) and lastly, the way you've placed her braid makes it look like a tail growing out of her butt. I'd change that.
Other than that there's of course anatomy, detail and finesse and so on, but that's nothing I can help you with. ^^

VonDaab · May 02, 2009, 03:10:25 AM

I dont see the "mistakes" Neij is pointing out...
They sound more like personal opinions.
I dont know why one should "decide" on the style like they would be rules written somewhere.
The fact that you dont follow any "style rules" is the foundation for your own art style.
Of course this requres basic knowledge of proper anatomy first...

Only thing that sort of gets my attention is the lineart, or the lack of it.
There's lot of gaps in between the lines, but as you said, you drew it quickly, so that explains it.

NejinOniwa · May 02, 2009, 06:53:30 AM

Well, you're more of an artist than I ever was, but that also makes us prone to seeing things from different viewpoints.
You can't see both sides of the coin at the same time, you know.