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Started by CaptBrenden, April 11, 2007, 12:16:05 AM

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NejinOniwa

Lol, k.


...wait...Who what when?
YOU COULD HAVE PREVENTED THIS

Darknight_88

Quote from: "CaptBrenden"okay, update.. ink complete, nex is tone work!

Looking nice.

Open to critics or considerated as finished?

CaptBrenden

Im always open to critics. I dont get offended by critics as much as some i know...

anyhow fire away.  I already know I have the perspective on the hammer off, Im lazy.
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Darknight_88

Quote from: "CaptBrenden"Im always open to critics. I dont get offended by critics as much as some i know...

anyhow fire away.  I already know I have the perspective on the hammer off, Im lazy.

Well, her left leg is way too open. That's a pretty long leg.

That's the thing that strikes me the most.

CaptBrenden

I suppose I can see that... now that you point it out... humm, is it worth the time to fix... :/ wish you would have pointed it out before the inking :P
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Darknight_88

Yeah, I have missed many pages from this thread. =/

Smokey

Any thoughts about coloring? 'Cause if i may, i'd suggest a dark (-ish) hue of red with green accents (not too dark obviously :D)...
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CaptBrenden

like I said before, my intention is to do it in comic book screen tone.  AKA manga style.  Tho if it were colored i tend to wear a mix of black red and white.  The skirt will be plaid, and that will be obvious once i tone it.  

pink and green is the cute little toki's style :3
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Smokey

Must've missed that....

In that case, i've said nothing and i'll wait for the next update... :D
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CaptBrenden



see, pink and green is tokis style :P  tho she does have cute taste in clothes X3
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Smokey

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Bella

Nice picture, Captain....and Toki's picture is adorable, too! :)

NejinOniwa

Where's she been lately, anyway?

I miss her. >_>
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Smokey

Yeah, where is Toki??...
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CaptBrenden

I stolded her away, Ill let her out for air once in a while tho

(srsly tho, I spoke to her last night but i forgot to ask her where shes been)
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