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Started by CaptBrenden, April 11, 2007, 12:16:05 AM

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VonDaab

Drew one of my charas dressed as XP.

She's straightening her shirt, not pinching her jellyrolls as it might look like, heh.

CaptBrenden

not bad, not bad at all
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C-Chan

Sou sou.... I was wondering what that Run.exe-tan was all about.  ^__^

Me likey, although not that I'm a stranger to liking your work after all.  ^__~

Darknight_88

Quote from: "VonDaab"Drew one of my charas dressed as XP.

She's straightening her shirt, not pinching her jellyrolls as it might look like, heh.
nice

And yeah, it doesn't look like she's straightening her shirt...you should have used only the fingers to pinch the shirt, not the whole hand >_>

SleepyD

Quote from: "VonDaab"Drew one of my charas dressed as XP.
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She's straightening her shirt, not pinching her jellyrolls as it might look like, heh.
Good job sir, I'd like to see more from ya. :3

Well, at least you noticed the error. ^^

doesn't seem like you're going to redo, but for future reference:
when you straighten your shirt you're usually pulling on it. So I'd think that line, (between her hands, just above the skirt) should be a lot more straight.  

Furthermore, like darknight said, it should be pinched. You can do it the way darknight suggested, by pinching it between two fingers or by making it look like she's gripping something smaller.  i.e. her hand would look like she's gripping a pencil, and cloth would be coming out from a small area (more wrinkles from there of course)

In both cases, we're reducing the amount of "stuff" in her hand. By pinching, there can only be so much between two fingers.  By gripping it tightly, you create the same effect by "compressing" the cloth.

VonDaab

Result of an IRC-discussion with Kami-tux.
Somekind of a Gentoo-tan.

C-Chan

*studies*

Hmmmmm.... a bit removed from J-kun's Gentoo-tan and the guys might say a thing or two about the arms, but the design is very cool and I do like your prop-work and draping detail.  ^__^

She does kinda strike me as a "Slackware"-based Distro-tan, but that's another story altogether.  ^.^'

VonDaab

I have no idea what kind of distro Gentoo is, I just drew it by kami-tux's description.

What about the arms?

zjhentohlauedy

*scrolls at high velocity*

2 more wow works from Darknight-san! Vistan's very awesome. and I'm excited to see what the finished Chivistan will look like!

Nice works too VonDaab!

*stares at avatar*

I wish my run.exe was like that! hehe

Nice to see the free cookies thread kept alive and well!
My my, aren't you lovely~

Alfamille

I know I'm late...but I just came to congratulate Darknight on having a great work on the Chivis-tan. People on ++ caught that illustration on their eyes.  ;010

Techno the fox

Quote from: "CaptBrenden"Proceed.




I really dont think its the capital letters that scare people. -_- but ill change the topic just the same.

OH SH--!!  o_o

Ummmm...Uhh...Heheheh *Innocent smile* *Hopes no one remembers the whole "Hurt and Heal" thing..*

*Freezes Me-tan Style*

Anyway..Nice art Captain.

Gussy Keniji

3.1-tan has Storm Troopers (or at least they remind me of Storm Troopers) either way awesome work Capn' Brenden

hmm...A carrot demon, adeptly named 'Incuroot'


And a blind amphibous monster in which I call a 'Mugrot'


Note:Once again that 'PimpDaddyPichu 07' thing is just my signature, for DA

"Wut..."

VonDaab

Quote from: "Gussy Keniji"3.1-tan has Storm Troopers
Correction:They are Warhammer 40k's Space Marines

Darknight_88



Not finished yet, but I'm just getting bored of this. Don't know what else to add/fix. Any crit?

VonDaab

Humm humm...

Do like.  *stamps a seal of approval*